The Flash Fiction Contest at the Chillibreeze forums  that ended last week had fabulous responses.  The winner of the contest is Payal Doshi, also a finalist at the Disney Pitchkiaow Contest. Congratulations Payal!

The winner was promised a chance to get published on the Chillibreeze website. Read on to find the contest details and the winning entry.

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The Theme: A Troubled Superwoman.

The Character: A superwoman who is everything a superwoman is expected to be. She is daring, kind, always around playing the “Lady in shining armor” One exception – she is terrified of kids! Oh by the way, she is also reporter with a popular newspaper.

The Situation: Our superwoman is sent to review a newly opened amusement park in the city. She has to save a group of pre-schoolers who get stranded at the amusement park. The kids are having a gala time enjoying dangerous rides without adult supervision. Our superwoman has to save the stranded kids and ensure their safety. Phew!!!! Being a superwoman is sure not an easy job now! Isn’t it??

Word limit: 200 words.

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The Winning Entry – Duty Calls!

The Troubled SuperWoman

Rocket Lady

“Our goal is for the kids have fun!” the manager of ‘Rollercoaster Heaven’ guffawed into the mike. I gestured my cameraman to     capture the panoramic view of topsy-turvy swivels dominating a cotton ball sky.

I winced under the shrieks of upside-down children. Kids, they were swift, agile, and scariest of all, unpredictable. I shuddered and focused on my interview.  Just as I was going to ask about safety precautions taken, their excited squeals turned into screams of anguish. I flipped my head around. Half the rollercoaster dangled off its tracks. The manager fainted. In a flash I spun behind a tree, linked my palms and rocketed into the sky.

“Rocket Lady! Rocket Lady!” The crowds hooted at my hovering pink and silver form.  As I elevated the derailed rollercoaster and placed it back on its tracks, a boy threw up on me.

“Oh no!” I faltered. But duty came first. I fled to the end of the coaster and slowly pushed it down the tracks so all the children could get off safely.
“Thank God for Rocket Lady!” The manager recovered, wiping his sweat studded face.

“Sure. But let’s talk safety,” I said, hiding a smile under my news reporter’s tone.

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Did you know that the Chillibreeze Contests thread is one of the most visited threads on the forum? Have you checked out the latest Chillibreeze writing contest  yet?

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Peer Review for Indian Writers

by Rekha Sridhar on May 24, 2011

Writer-DiscussionI don’t call myself an expert writer and definitely envy those who can churn out flawless content. There are times when I get carried away by the subject and find it impossible to look at my writing objectively.  This is where I feel an evaluation by a peer who has ‘been there and done that’ would help.

What do I expect from a peer review?

  • Feedback from a writer’s point of view:  Writers have the ability to read content objectively and are quick to notice praiseworthy content and point out overlooked errors
  • Constructive criticism pointing out my strengths and weaknesses will help me work on areas that need improvisation
  • Feedback on writing style, presentation, grammar, formatting.
  • Suggestions to help improve my self-editing skills

While there are plenty of sites offering tips on peer reviews, I was unable to find a single site or writing community forum dedicated to Indian writers (Correct me if I am wrong).  Does this mean we are reluctant to put ourselves on the chopping block? Here is a call to all closet writers. Let’s shed our inhibitions, share our work and learning, I believe feedback from fellow writers can make a big difference to every writer.

Would you submit your writing for peer review? What is your biggest concern about peer reviews?

About the author

Rekha Sridhar, Outreach Program Coordinator at Chillibreeze

Rekha is the Outreach Program Coordinator at Chillibreeze. She loves all things that spell design, food, fitness and travel. She translates her passions by blogging and interacting with folks with similar interests in the virtual world.

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