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Author: Arya
The candy house was not made out of candy but it looked like it was made out of candy. The grass was green and shining when the rising sun shone on it. Right beside the grass was the candy house. It had one large window ate the front and three tiny windows at the side. It had a sloping roof and stairs in front of the door. The tiny window at the side is hidden by a big, great bush with red flowers. Near the grass there was a river.
There are two houses on either side of Candy house. Sometimes people who visited said they can say ‘ Home sweet Home ‘ because it was called candy house.
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