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Author: Neha Bharat
It was a hot summer day and a lot of crowding around the deck to get in a boat. Finally after the last group’s turn they all took a seat in the blue and yellow boat. As the boat started moving everyone put their life jackets on. The colourful boat and the journey made me feel excited. Everyone was laughing and talking as the boat moved and the blue foamy water splashed on them. The picture made me happy because of all the fun the men were having. It reminds me of when I was sitting in a boat and moving in the water. The seven men in the boat were all happy and cheerful. Most of the people were relaxing as the person in the front and the people at the back rowed the boat. After a few hours everyone got out of the boat and waved to each other. Everyone left the boat feeling very happy.
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