Comments on: Pokey Times http://chillibreeze.in/rate-articles-get-your-writing-rated/miscellaneous/pokey-times/ In Chillibreeze Weblog Sun, 20 May 2012 18:19:37 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Chillibreeze http://chillibreeze.in/rate-articles-get-your-writing-rated/miscellaneous/pokey-times/comment-page-1/#comment-479 Chillibreeze Tue, 12 Jan 2010 08:31:56 +0000 http://chillibreeze.in/?p=1528#comment-479 It’s a well written piece. The humor and style of narration is very engaging. Here are 5 things that we liked or would change/revise: 1. <strong>Title</strong>: The intriguing title will help draw the reader in. 2. <strong>Format</strong>: This piece flows well and keeps the reader absorbed right to the end. 3. <strong>Grammar & Usage</strong>: The piece reads well but could do with some minor edits. 4. <strong>Language</strong>: The write-up has a light, breezy feel to it. The style is interesting and works for the piece. 5. <strong>Target Audience</strong>: The style of writing is distinct and will appeal to a niche audience. It’s a well written piece. The humor and style of narration is very engaging.

Here are 5 things that we liked or would change/revise:

1. Title: The intriguing title will help draw the reader in.
2. Format: This piece flows well and keeps the reader absorbed right to the end.
3. Grammar & Usage: The piece reads well but could do with some minor edits.
4. Language: The write-up has a light, breezy feel to it. The style is interesting and works for the piece.
5. Target Audience: The style of writing is distinct and will appeal to a niche audience.

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