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January 30, 2008
To be in state of being a mother is described as motherhood. It’s a wonderful experience to be a mother and those who are going through this experience will agree with me that this experience has changed them as a person completely. The experience of being a mother teaches you so many things in life that you tend to be a better person.
The motherhood status can be enjoyed in much better way in today’s techno time. Here I will like to mention that you can only enjoy this experience if you have planned your motherhood otherwise it will be just another responsibility in life. To have this experience you have to give sacrifices in terms of your valuable time and energy and your whole attention. Well some call it sacrifices, some say it’s their duty, some argue why only mothers should do and not fathers and some just give themselves priority and for them their baby is the other asset in life. Whatever may be the reason but we can’t run from our responsibilities as mother and mind you, if you run, be prepared for the repercussions.
The scientific arena around the world has done much work about the way various things affect the babies. How can we work upon those things to get positive effects on our babies and how we manage ourselves with our babies depend upon us only? It’s the matter of inclination only. Instead of thinking about fulfilling yours unfulfilled ambitions through your baby start thinking about how to create a nurturing environment around him for his proper development, how to give your valuable time to him in a positive way, and how to help him out to realize about his positive traits.
Motherhood feeling starts from the moment of conception. It’s a blessing that you have conceived and now it’s your duty to take care of that little creature. It’s your choice only. Though the initial trimester has its downside also. Health-wise you have to be very alert as any negative effect on your health is going to affect your baby. Now here the scientific awareness can help you to have sound development of your baby within you. Try to be aware of nutritious food you can take which can be beneficial for the baby. Awareness regarding the in take of necessary amount of calcium, protein, vitamins can boost the good health of the developing baby. Besides the food your exercise schedule, and habits like walking, reading, listening to music habits can be added help for the all-round development of your baby.
Music has a very positive effect on the development of the baby in the womb. The recent scientific researches have shown that the type of music you hear also effects the personality of your baby. If you listen to rock music your baby can have inclination for fights. How interesting! So mothers who want to see their kids as classical singers start listening to classical music throughout your pregnancy.
Working mothers-to-be are occupied with their work. Its good that they are busy and this will help them in being active. But they should also take out time to know about different stages of pregnancy, which exercise to follow for healthy delivery, and what to eat and what not. In-fact nowadays world is compressed on Internet and there are many groups there of same interest group like groups for mothers-to-be having same due date of their babies. Its quite interesting to join such group as it helps you to know, the things you are facing in your pregnancy period is being faced by every pregnant woman. And then they share their dreams about their baby, they discuss names; they exchange ideas with each other. In brief it’s quite interesting to be a member of such group. Who knows you can find some good friend their residing in some remote part of world.
The nine months of the pregnancy period can be life remembering if you plan them well. After all it’s for your own baby whom you are going to deliver and going to have life time bonding. So why not gift him the best of health and wellness when he opens his eyes in this world. Best of luck!
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Your article reflects your passion for the subject but it requires some editing and formatting before it is ready for publication. An arresting introduction will help capture the interest of your readers. If you interwove some of your experiences it will make the article more interesting.
Here are 5 things that we liked or would change/revise:
1. Title: The title needs editing. The word’ job’ can be omitted from the title OR title it Take the job of Motherhood seriously! The title also indicates that the article will be on how to be a better mother while it is actually on the period before motherhood. Perhaps a title that is more about pregnancy/how to prepare for the job of motherhood would be more appropriate?
2. Format: This piece could do with some structuring. To help it flow well.
3. Grammar & Usage: The article is heartfelt but the language is weak and the presence of grammatical errors takes away from the impact. You may want to consider our Detailed Expert Review or editing option.
4. Language: Try and use short, simple sentences for greater impact. The opening paragraph needs to have more impact. Currently the words ‘mother’ and ‘experience’ are used to often in the first 2-3 lines and this is distracting.
5. Target Audience: Your article addresses a number of issues that would interest new parents but a fitting conclusion would need to incite the reader to think about related issues or help summarize what has been said in the article