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Thou the Beautiful Woman!!!

by Chillibreeze on March 13, 2010

in Poem

A short tribute to woman kind!!!

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Author: Rakhi Bhargava

Thou the member of the fairer sex,
Thou compared to goddess Venus,
Though the epitome of love and sacrifice,
Thou the beautiful woman……….

So many pains and pressures on you,
Yet you smilingly bear all,
You seem so soft yet thou so strong,
You really amaze all!

Life been kind to the man,
And many a time been unkind to you,
Yet you bear the brunt without a tear,
Ur virtue ever so strong!

You the mother daughter sister and friend,
You change roles with changing times,
You make the destiny of every man,
Yet you pride to be a woman!

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