Comments on: My Moving Life: From India to UK http://chillibreeze.in/rate-articles-get-your-writing-rated/travel-writing/my-moving-life-from-india-to-uk/ In Chillibreeze Weblog Wed, 08 Feb 2012 08:40:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.2 By: namastevandu http://chillibreeze.in/rate-articles-get-your-writing-rated/travel-writing/my-moving-life-from-india-to-uk/comment-page-1/#comment-1006 namastevandu Fri, 12 Mar 2010 11:20:42 +0000 http://chillibreeze.in/?p=2587#comment-1006 The article began smoothly, tugging at the right emotional strings with near-perfect timing. But just as the reader was becoming engrossed in the author's style, the article halts to an abrupt stop. The ending could have been just as smooth as the beginning. The article breif gives the impression that the author will be relating to several "moving" tales but the surprise is broken by simply relating the experience at England. Either the brief could have been tweeked or the article could have carried a few more experiences. Otherwise, the article is pretty good stuff. The article began smoothly, tugging at the right emotional strings with near-perfect timing. But just as the reader was becoming engrossed in the author’s style, the article halts to an abrupt stop. The ending could have been just as smooth as the beginning.

The article breif gives the impression that the author will be relating to several “moving” tales but the surprise is broken by simply relating the experience at England. Either the brief could have been tweeked or the article could have carried a few more experiences.

Otherwise, the article is pretty good stuff.

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